【独家】2017年6月四级押题—写作篇(五)

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【独家】2017年6月四级押题—写作篇(一)

【独家】2017年6月四级押题—写作篇(二)

【独家】2017年6月四级押题—写作篇(三)

【独家】2017年6月四级押题—写作篇(四)


提纲情景类

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Attend Your Classes Regularly. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese.

1. 现在大学校园里,逃课旷课是常见的现象

2. 造成这种现象的原因是什么

3. 如何减少这种现象

 

【范文】

Nowadays, it’s frequently seen that some university students are absent from classes and some students even slope off before the class is over. Some reasons can be considered to cause the situation.

On the one hand, the students complain that those classes, particularly elective courses, are so boring that it is a little bit wasting their valuable time to attend the classes. Additionally, students are busy dealing their personal affairs and sometimes they would like to take a good rest instead of attending unattractive classes. Meanwhile, passing the exams without attending the classes is quite easy. On the other hand, the teachers of these courses are not eager to improve the courses. What's worse, they sometimes are not responsible for their classes.  

Totally, a low rate of presence is caused by both some students themselves and irresponsible teachers. Students should put utmost emphasis on their study while teachers should pay great attention to enhancing their courses.

 

【译文】

现如今在大学生中逃课是一个普遍现象,甚至还有一些学生在上课期间溜出教室。各种原因如下。

一方面,很多学生抱怨那些大学课程尤其是选修课程太无聊,他们认为参加这些课程有点浪费他们宝贵的时间。此外,一些学生忙于处理他们自己的事情,有时候他们宁愿好好休息也不乐意去上那些完全提不起兴趣的课程,同时,不去上课也很容易就能通过考试。另一方面,这些课程的老师并不想改进自己的课程;更糟糕的是,这些老师不够负责。

总的来说,低出勤率是学生自己和不负责的老师共同造成的。学生理应关注学习,老师也应该专注于改进自己的课程。

 

【解析】

本题属于情景类作文,题目符合大学生的生活场景,相信大家都能畅所欲言

内容上,首段介绍问题背景;第二段分析问题;第三段做出总结,并给出相应的解决方案。

结构上,采用传统的三段论,意在表现出清晰的行文结构。

语言上,采用多处同义替换、被动语态以及连词,使得语言更加多变,逻辑更加清晰。

 



Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “Communication is the key to personal and career success.” You can cite examples to illustrate the importance of communication. You should write at least 120 words, but no more than 180 words.

 

【范文】

As is known to all, communication skill is one of the most indispensable social skills in our daily life and working so it is critically necessary to stress its importance.

It’s becoming increasingly important to communicate with others in both personal and career success. If you fail in communicating with others, you will miss many opportunities to improve yourself. For example, if you’re often impolite in talking with your boss, you will probably be considered as an rude man and should not be entrusted with important post. Moreover, if you pay less attention to communication skills with your clients, they will probably find another cooperator.

In view of the importance above, we should learn to master the skills of communication in daily life and working to exchange ideas and eliminate contradictions. Only in this way can a harmonious society be made under our joint efforts.

 

【译文】

众所周知,沟通技巧是日常生活和工作过程中不可或缺的社交技能之一,因此非常有必要强调沟通的重要性。

在个人生活与商业活动中,与他人交流变得越来越重要。如果你不能和其他人交流,就会错过很多提升自己的机会。比如说,你和你的上司说话很无理,那么他可能会认为你很野蛮、不能委以重任。此外,如果你和客户说话也缺乏技巧,那么他们就去找别人了。

基于以上几点重要性,我们在生活中和工作中掌握良好的沟通技巧以交流思想、消除矛盾。只有这样,我们才能共同建设出和谐的社会。

 

【解析】

题目要求就一句话进行评论,并通过举例说明沟通的重要性,属于情景类写作。

内容上,开头部分,开门见山提出沟通在个人生活和工作场合的重要性。主体段即从这两方面阐述了其原因。结尾段再次重申良好的沟通能力才是构建和谐社会的关键。

结构上,思路清晰,首段提出文章观点,并在两方面进行了强调,提示文章主体段内容。主体段逻辑清晰,分两条阐述了沟通的重要性,并举例说明沟通如何在这两方面对我们的大有好处。尾段再次点题重申观点,并将文章立意做了升华。

语言上,词汇准确丰富,采用了较多介词短语和分词短语使句子表达更加丰富;句型上除简单句外,还使用了状语从句、倒装句等句型使文章句式多变。



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