【独家】2017年6月四级押题—写作篇(二)

对啊英语四六级2020-10-16 12:45:10

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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the statistics provided in the chart below (No use of social media). Please give a brief description of the chart first and then make comments on it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


 

【范文】


With the development of computer science technology, social media becomes more and more diverse, such as QQ, Wechat and Weibo. While there are still vast number of people holding negative attitudes toward contact via Internet. As the bar chart shows, almost a half of the people investigated believe that it is a waste of time to use social media. People who don’t know how to use it or those even don’t know much about it take up nearly 15% and 10% respectively.

To mainly account for the phenomenon, I think the reasons are as follows. Firstly, some don’t feel the need to share everything with everybody they know in case of disclosing of privacy. Secondly, the pace of modern life is so fast that the majority of us have no spare time spent on social media. Thirdly, although Internet makes it convenient to communicate with others, face-to-face contact can by no means be substituted.

Nevertheless, we cannot be blind to the importance of social media. Social media can help people or companies to create, share, or exchange information in virtual communities and networks. To make the most of it, it’s important to fully understand the concept of social media and how it can be applied in ways that will help you enrich your life.

 

【译文】


随着计算机科学技术的发展,社交媒体变得越来越多样化,如QQ、微信、微博。然而仍有很多人对互联网联络持否定态度。正如柱状图所示,几乎一半的参与研究的人者认为使用社交媒体是浪费时间。不知道如何使用社交媒体,甚至对社交媒体没有过多了解的人,分别占了近15%和10%。

对于主要现象,我认为原因如下。首先,有些人为了防止隐私泄露,觉得没有必要将所有事与所有人分享。其次,现代生活节奏如此之快,以至于我们大多数人没有空余时间用在社交媒体上。第三,虽然互联网方便了与人交流,但面对面的交流是不可替代的。

然而,我们不能忽视社会媒体的重要性。社交媒体可以帮助人们或公司在虚拟社区和网络中创建、共享或交换信息。要充分利用它,重要的是要充分了解社会媒体的概念,以及通过何种方式使用它才能助于你丰富你的生活。

 

【解析】


题目要求根据图片描述的内容做简单描述同时发表自己对图表反应内容的看法。

内容上,开头部分,首段对图表数据反应的内容以及来源进行描述,同时进行了2-3处数据细节描述。中间段落分析了造成现象的几条原因,尾段加入了作者本身对于图表反应出来内容的评论。

逻辑上,结构清晰,首段描述图表主题,中间段落罗列几条造成该现象的几条原因,结尾段落发表个人观点看法,符合题目要求。

语言上,词汇准确,形式多变,采用分词短语,介词短语以及不定式短语来扩充句子,同时在句式上采用了主语从句,定语从句,状语从句以及宾语从句,被动句等高级句型句式。

 

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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and express your views on the importance of learning a foreign language. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


 

【范文】


This picture vividly shows that a king is studying Portuguese, while the queen is wondering whether it is of necessity to learn a foreign language. From my prospective, no matter who you are, it is always significant to acquire a foreign language.

The two main reasons for which we should learn a foreign language are as follows. On the one hand, with the growing demands of economic and cultural exchange all over the world, people who work together may come from different countries, which requires us to master a foreign language. Therefore, the language skill may help us greatly in working as well as communication. On the other hand, with a foreign language, we could gain much more access to knowledge in other languages and it is always a pleasure to communicate with friends whose language and cultural background are different from us.

In conclusion, acquiring a foreign language could not only help us gain more working opportunities but also enrich our life experience, as well as broaden our horizon. Only in this way, can we live a more meaningful and colorful life.

 

【译文】


这张图片生动地描绘了这样一种景象:一位国王正在学习葡萄牙语,他的王后则对此深表疑惑。在我看来,无论什么人,都有学习一门外语的必要。

我们应该学习一门外语的主要原因有如下两条:一方面,随着全世界经济、文化沟通需求的不断增长,共同工作的同事可能来自于不同的国家,这就要求我们懂一门外语。因此,语言技能可能在工作中和交流中给我们带来极大帮助。另一方面,懂得一门外语能让我们有更多机会了解不同语言的知识,并且与不同语言和文化背景的人交流本身也是一件乐事。

因此,学习一门外语不仅能帮助我们取得更多的工作机会,而且能丰富我们的生活阅历、开拓我们的视野。也正因此,我们才能将生活过得更丰富多彩。

 

【解析】

题目要求对一张图进行描述,并写出学习一门外语的重要性,属于图画类写作。

内容上,开头部分,除描图外还阐述了学习一门外语的重要性。主体段从工作需要和开拓视野两方面阐述了其原因。结尾段再次重申学习一门外语可以让我们的生活更加充实、多彩。

结构上,思路清晰,首段描图并提出文章观点,强调任何人都应该学习一门外语。主体段逻辑清晰,分两条阐述了学习外语的重要性,并举例说明学习外语带来的好处。尾段再次点题重申观点、总结全文。

语言上,词汇准确丰富,采用了较多介词短语和分词短语使句子表达更加丰富;句型上除简单句外,还使用了并列句、非限定性定语从句和倒装句等句型使文章句式多变。



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