四六级考前范文诵读-品质类,环境类

蒋华老师学堂2019-12-01 16:24:33


一、个人品质类作文练习



(一) 审题谋篇

本题为图画作文中的现象阐释题型。一种普遍的现象通过漫画展示出来,而且在漫画中有明确的文字说明,揭示了漫画所反映出的主题,在行文时需要对文章中所反映的现象进行一定的描述,再给出对现象的评论和态度。


在写作时,首先要审题,明确漫画反映的主题。考生一看画,映入眼帘的是一瓶倾倒在地上、哗哗而流的水,对待这种现象旁边的两个人看法截然不同,一个人看上去很悲伤,一个人看上去依然乐观。这幅图画折射出一个很重要的问题:心态,即我们应该怎样去看待周围的世界。当然我们可以从不同的角度去看待、思考我们周围的世界,但是在很大程度上,这篇漫画反映出:我们应该以自信、积极的心态去看待问题。


这篇文章可以遵循三段式写作。第一段描写图画,简要描述两个人对一瓶倾倒的水不同的反应和态度;第二段点题,讨论图画的意义,可以用论点进行支撑,比如为什么要采取积极的生活态度等;第三段,谈个人对此的观点。


(二) 参考范文

As is unfolded in the cartoon above, in front of a knocked-over bottle of water with most water flowing out stand two men. One man, looking rather upset, says “There is nothing left. How unlucky I am!”, while the other one quickly picks up the bottle, saying “I’m such a lucky dog, and there is still some left”. How vivid the cartoon is! The two men show quite different attitudes toward the same situation.


Without any doubt, the purpose of the cartoon is to show us that we should keep optimistic no matter what circumstances we undergo. First and foremost, it is universally held that life is by no means perfect and in the course of life we are bound to experience and encounter a variety of difficulties. In order to achieve our goal, we should tackle the obstacles positively rather than in a negative way. In the second place, according to some research findings, a positive attitude does good to our life in that it will assist us in solving the tough issues. 


From what has been argued above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that we should embrace positive attitudes and behave confidently. Only in this way can we solve the issues confronting us successfully.


(三)写作技巧

第一段,简要描述图画

As is unfolded in the cartoon above, …

第二段,揭示寓意,并进行论点支撑

Without any doubt, the purpose of the cartoon is to show us that…

First and foremost, it is universally held that…

In the second place, we all hold an idea that…

第三段,提出个人观点,并加以评论

From what has been argued above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that…

Only in this way can we…






(一)审题谋篇

    本次大作文话题为大家一直计较关注的环保问题。因此,话题复现是很自然的。

    文章采取总分总结构。第一段描述图画,描述的内容一定要与主题相关。第一句可以总写图画,也可以先点明文章观点。接着,第二/三句具体描写图画内容。最后一句再次点题。第二段揭示产生问题的原因。可以列举2-3个理由。或者写此问题可能导致的结果。最后一段提出解决问题的方案或者措施。


(二)参考范文

The terrible scene depicted in the cartoon shows that some people in our life still lack the awareness of environmental protection. The picture illustrates that two tourists are chatting and eating happily on a boat and casually throwing their rubbish into the lake which is full of litter and waste. The drawing sets us thinking too much due to its far-reaching influence.


Nowadays, though the awareness of protecting environment is being accepted by more and more people, we can still see many unpleasant scenes especially in scenic spots. Why does this phenomenon arise? Many factors are accounting for it. First and foremost, to some people, the consciousness of protecting environment is still not so strong. They may not think it is a big deal to throw rubbish everywhere. In addition, the environmental management system isn’t so satisfying. For example, in some places there’re few regulations or the implementation is seldom performed actually.


From what has been discussed above, it is urgent to take some effective and relative measures. In the first place, we should continue to conduct more propaganda in communities and schools so as to let people realize the importance of protecting environment. In the second, more rules should be made and carried out by the government to restrain the conduction of destroying environment. People should work together to create clean and beautiful surroundings. 


(三)

写作技巧

The terrible scene depicted in the cartoon shows that…

The drawing sets us thinking too much due to …

Many factors are accounting for …


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