还有3天就考四六级了,真的还能再提分?

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本来四六级是和我们是没太大关系的

但是有同学在后台留言

希望最近多出一点作文佳句

快考四六级

对写作文很有帮助


所以这次

一篇文章中整理了往常两倍的句子

加上之前的

一共是37个作文佳句


如果你3天后考四六级

那就把这几个句子记得滚瓜烂熟吧

绝对用的上




可能有些同学对这个栏目不太了解

我再简单介绍一下


这个栏目叫做【整容作文

顾名思义

就是希望通过对考研英语的阅读原文

进行修改调整

使其变为可以应用于作文的模板句型


一边想在作文中写出高级的句子

另一边又反感千篇一律的模板

这个矛盾的问题怎么解决呢

自制一份专属于自己的私人订制作文模板

就从历年真题的阅读原文中挑选句子

第一不会有语法和单词错误

第二使用的句型复杂又高端

这就是最完美的范文嘛


每期会从真题阅读中挑选5-10个句子

不仅有句子的亮点评析

还有应用例句

以便大家更好的应用于自己的作文模板中



「整容作文」第五期

2008年真题阅读



01


【原文佳句】

Women are particularly susceptible to developing depression and anxiety disorders in response to stress compared to men.


【亮点评析】

本句的亮点是几个词组的使用:be particularly susceptible to,In response to和 compared to。 


【写作应用】

People who underestimate their abilities are particularly susceptible to overestimating the obstacle and difficulty in response to the challenges compared to those confident ones.

与自信的人相比,低估自己能力的人在面临挑战时很容易高估障碍和困难。[可用于2007年写作] 

Pampered children are particularly susceptible to developing depression and anxiety disorders in response to stress compared to that average ones. In other situations, they may be susceptible to becoming arrogant and wayward compared to others.

在压力面前,与一般的孩子相比,娇生惯养的孩子更容易情绪低落,更容易焦虑不安。在其他情况下,他们还可能更容易变得自负和桀骜不驯。[可用于2003年写作]



02


【原文佳句】

It’ s not necessarily that women don’ t cope as well. It’ s just that they have so much more to cope with.


【亮点评析】

原文的亮点是句式It’ s not necessary that...,lt’ s just that...,用先抑后扬的手法引出主题


【写作应用】

It is not necessarily that the player in the picture could not hit the goal. It is just that he is not confident enough to do so.

并不是说图画中的球员不能射中球门,而是说他缺乏信心。[可用于2007年写作]

It is not necessarily that cooperation can solve all the problems. It is just that it can build up an atmosphere to help us solve the present problem.

并不是说合作就能解决一切问题,而是说合作能提供一个环境帮助我们解决目前的问题。[可用于2008年写作]



03


【原文佳句】

The kinds of interpersonal violence that women are exposed to tend to be in domestic situations, by, unfortunately, parents or other family members, and they tend not to be one-shot deals.


【亮点评析】

本句内容复杂,但层次清楚,that引导的定语从句,插入语 unfortunately和句末的并列成分都是值得模仿的结构。


【写作应用】

The kinds of mistreatment or even violence that the old people are exposed to tend to be in domestic situation, by, unfortunately, their own children, who try to shun their obligations, and they tend not to be on deals.

老人所遭受的虐待甚至暴力通常是来自家庭内部,往往会多次出现,不幸的是,他们是被自己的孩子虐待,因为这些孩子想逃避责任。[可用于2005年写作]

The kinds of social stress that disabled persons are exposed to tend to be increasingly heavy out of, unfortunately, all kinds of discrimination and bias, and they tend not to be easy to overcome. 不幸的是因为各种歧视和偏见,残疾人面对的社会压力越来越大,而且很难消除。[可用于2008年写作]



04


【原文佳句】

The internet-and pressure from funding agencies, who are questioning why commercial publishers are making money from government-funded research by restricting access to it-is making access to scientific results a reality.


【亮点评析】

本句的亮点是破折号引出插入语。


【写作应用】

Cooperation-and common goals for these two disabled people, who decide to travel the world as the one-is making their dream real.

合作——以及两个残疾人共同的目标:周游世界——使他们梦想成[可用于2008年写作]

The love-and sympathy towards those who are suffering is making our society better and better.

爱心一一以及对受苦难人的同情——使我们的社会越来越美好。[可用于2001年写作]



05


【原文佳句】

The report, by John Houghton of Victoria university in Australia and Graham Vickery of the OECD, makes heavy reading for publishers who have so far, made handsome profits. 


【亮点评析】

本句的亮点是主语后面的介词短语成分的作用,是对主语的限定说明。


【写作应用】

The shelter, from their parents or grandparents, will make the future more challengeable to children who have, so far, been considered as “the flowers in the greenhouse”.

父母和爷爷奶奶提供的庇护使得这些孩子的未来生活充满挑战,而这些孩子一直被认为是“温室里的花朵”。[可用于2003年写作]

The implied meaning, illustrated in the cartoon, makes surprise revelation for those who have so far been self-centered or aggressive.

有些人很自私或者喜欢先发制人,对他们来说,漫画的寓言可能使他们始料未及。[可用于2008年写作]



06


【原文佳句】

But it goes further than that. It signals a change in what has, until now, been a key element of scientific endeavor.


【亮点评析】

原文虽短,但结构复杂。第一句用肯定句说明否定意义,第二句中的插入语( until now)和what从句都值得模仿。 in what相当于 in the things which,全句等于 i signals a change in the things which has been a key element of scientific endeavor


【写作应用】

But it goes further than that. It signals total exhaustion of fish resources which has, until now, been beyond the imagination of most people.

不仅如此,它还说明海洋鱼资源的枯竭,到目前为止,很多人都难以想象到这种情形。[可用2000年写作]

But it goes further than that. It signals a new start which has, until now been neglected by most people. 

不仅如此,它还代表一个新的起点,到目前为止,很多人都忽略了这一点。[可用于2004年写作]



07



【原文佳句】

The bodies playing major professional sports have changed dramatically over the years managers have been more than wiling to adjust team uniforms to fit the growing numbers of bigger, longer frames.


【亮点评析】

这是一个并列句,主要亮点是词汇,如: dramatically, over the years, more than willing to do sth.。


【写作应用】

The standard of life has improved dramatically over the years, and parents have been more than willing tn keep their only children under their full protection.

近年来,人们的生活水平发生了很大变化,而父母也更愿意给予子女更多的保护。[可用于2003年写作]

The number of the internet surfers has risen dramatically over the years, and young people have been more than willing to communicate with each other on the net.

近年来,因特网用户增加了很多,年轻人也更愿意在网上互相交流。[可用于2009年写作]




08



【原文佳句】

Growth, which rarely continues beyond the age of 20, demands calories and nutrients—notably, protein—to feed expanding tissues.


【亮点评析】

本句的亮点是两个插入语 which rarely continues beyond the age of 20和 notably, protein前一个用逗号和主句隔开,后一个用破折号和主句隔开。


【写作应用】

Idol-worshipping, which catches on among young people nowadays, demands time, effort and resources- notably, money- to collect the information about their idols.

偶像崇拜现今在年轻人中很流行,它需要时间、精力和资源一特别是金钱一才能收集到偶像的信息。[可用于2006年写作]

Success, which is always difficult to achieve demands positive attitude-notably confidence and commitment-to overcome challenges of various kinds.

要想获得成功是很难的,它需要积极的人生态度—特别是信心和奉献—才能战胜各种各样的挑战。[可用于2007年写作] 

Cooperation, without which no individual or civilization could survive, demands special personal attributes-notably, honesty and tolerance-to achieve great progress.

没有合作,个人无法生存,文明也不可能实现。合作需要特殊的个人素质—特别是诚实和宽容一才能取得巨大的进步。[可用于2008年写作]




09



【原文佳句】

Genetic maximums can change, but don’ t expect this to happen soon.


【亮点评析】

本句可用作建议措施段落的开头部分。


【写作应用】

Everybody can become famous, but don’ t expect this to happen soon if one just imitates the star.

每个人都有可能成为明星,但不要以为只是模仿就能让自己成为明星。[可用于2006年写作] Morality education can work, but don’ t expect this to happen soon. So the best policy is to punish those who ill-treat their parents.

道德教育可能有效,但不要指望短期就能见效。因此最好的策略就是处罚那些虐待父母的人。[可用于2005年写作]




10



【原文佳句】

That’ s a far different image from the cherry-tree-chopping George most people remember from their history books.


【亮点评析】

本句的亮点是前半部分 a far different image from


【写作应用】

The two people have built a team to travel.That’ s a far different image from the disabled person people get from their experiences.

两个人组成了一个旅行的团队。这和人们根据自己经历得出的普通残疾人形象完全不同。[可用于2008年写作]

The girl is a far different image from the average Americans most people gather from their books, TV and movies.

这个女孩和大多数人从书籍、电视和电影中得到的美国人形象完全不同。[可用于2002年写作]




11



【原文佳句】

More significantly, they argue that many of the Founding Fathers knew slavery was wrong and yet most did little to fight it .


【亮点评析】

本句的亮点是后半句破折号,它表示思路的变化。


【写作应用】

More significantly, they argue that many of the parents know pampering a child is wrong-and yet mo do little to change it.

最重要的是,他们认为很多父母都知道溺爱孩子不对,但很少有人采取措施去改变这现象。[可用于2003年写作]

More significantly, most aggressive people knew the advantages of cooperation and yet most did little to practice it.

最重要的是,大多数性情暴躁的人都知道合作的好处,但很少有人愿意与他人合作。[可用于2008年写作]

More ridiculously, they argue that chatting on the net may not build up good personal relationship-and yet most expect they can.

最好笑的是,他们争辩说,在网上聊天不太可能建立良好的个人关系,但很多人都相信自己是例外。[可用于2009年写作]

More significantly, they argue that many of the fishermen knew overfishing was harmful to mother nature and yet did little to fight it.

最重要的是,他们认为很多渔民都知道过度捕捞对大自然有害,但很少有人去改变。[可用于2000年写作]




12



【原文佳句】

More than anything, the historians say, the founders were hampered by the culture of their time.


【亮点评析】

本句的亮点是词组 more than anything和插入语 the historians say .


【写作应用】

More than anything, we can conclude, two football players are hampered by their self-inflicted set backs.最重要的是,我们可以得出结论,两个球员都被自身的弱点所束缚。[可用于2007年写作]

More than anything we can conclude, we should not be hampered by competence.

最重要的是,我们得出结论,竞争不能挡住我们的脚步。[可用于2008年写作]




13



【原文佳句】

Washington, who had begun to believe that all men were created equal after observing the bravery of the black soldiers during the revolutionary war, overcame the strong opposition of his relatives to grant his slaves their freedom in his will.


【亮点评析】

本句中的定语从句(who...)和谓语动词(overcame)的动作是一前一后的概念。


【写作应用】

Team member, who begin to believe that cooperation is always the best policy in ace of challenge be free from prejudice and collaborate with their partners.

团队成员,一旦意识到合作是面临挑战时最好的,就不再持有偏见,并和他人携手合作。[可用于2008年写作] 

Some young people, who begin to believe that everything Beckham is or does is perfect, will fight against the strong opposition of their parents to make the hairstyle like beckham and even have his name painted on their faces.

年轻人开始相信贝克汉姆的一切都无可挑剔,他们将会与父母抗争,给自己做个“小贝头”,或者把贝克汉姆的名字写在自己的脸上。[可用于2006年写作]





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